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  1. Phoenix

    Music ♫

    Would fall under country, I guess, but not exactly. I love it. Even if you're not a fan of country (like me), I believe the lyrics will win your heart. I dedicate this to all the friends and people I love ❤️ https://youtu.be/yEGJa6JGh84
  2. Phoenix

    Hello

    Welcome to the LOLScans forum, Sedna! I am Phoenix, and we've already briefly exchanged words on discord. Hope you'll enjoy your time here!
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    Do you like rain?

    Ah, I see. Yeah, nice, cool breeze and lightning and thunders are nice
  4. Phoenix

    Do you like rain?

    B-b-but...!
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    Do you like rain?

    It's been a while since it rained at my place. I really like it, especially in winters when it gets extra chilly because of it! What about you guys? Do you like rain? Or are you the one of those peeps that prefer to stay inside and go "Ugh, it's raining again..." ?
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    [Poetry] A Plastered Smile

    Thank you for the feedback and the pointer, Zaph! I'll edit that! Heh, most of my poetry is like that, although I'll try to share the uplifting and positive ones too. 😂
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    [Poetry] A Plastered Smile

    I usually look up prompts on either different contests or writing activities to see what could inspire me to write something. The prompt that made me write this poem was: What goes inside the human mind when it comes to thoughts is an enigma. A mystery to the human eye. We cannot hear someone thinking, but with observation, we can see. A Plastered Smile Have you seen how she smiles, radiantas the spring sun itself, corners of her mouthrising showing the tiny, purple healing bruise on the lip,perfectly concealed with lipstick, remnant of her past?Have you seen her dress up, an angelin disguise, in her blue dress that lookslike the deep, soothing ocean itselfburying the deep scars on her back?Have you seen her play, so dynamic, in action,with the kids in the park everyday in evening,their heart filled laughter echoing through the place,hers masking the desire to make a beautiful life, see it grow every day?Have you seen how she plays the violinthe melody dispersing in the foster home of kids,bringing a smile to their faces, all the while hiding such pain behind her closed peaceful eyes?Have you seen how after the entire dayof smiling, when she goes back to bedand it's replaced by a frown as the tearsget soaked into, hid by the pillowthat's dry by morning as the day beginsand a smile is plastered to conceal all of it,again?
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    The Embodiment of Grief

    Woah, lots of things happening here. Quite an unexpected ending. I'd have thought the boy would just go with ending his own life, but that would be too cliched and judging from what I know about you, that would have been boring 😂. Clever. My favourite part was the very last line. Just one of the things I noticed was inconsistency caused by the change of the tense from past to present in the same sentence. Write on!
  9. As happy as I get to see a new chapter release for this series, I feel equally sad because it's nearing the inevitable tragedy
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    Marry Me! [Chapter Discussion]

    I can't believe I didnt look up this series when I joined LOLscans. So glad I found it now. I absolutely love the artwork and the story! Thank you for the latest chapter! ;D
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